01-14-2013, 01:50 AM
I think this poem shows well the awkwardness of intellectualizing feelings. Especially when you're at one and the same time a romantic idealist and cursed with an over-logical train of thought. That awkwardness might not be a conscious intention, but you said over and over that you're new to writing, so I don't think you'll mind me saying that all that much.
But it still works on that level, that awkward, clumsy attempt to rationalize feelings past and present. And it's effective. So there.
But it still works on that level, that awkward, clumsy attempt to rationalize feelings past and present. And it's effective. So there.