01-13-2013, 10:57 PM
Thanks jferrell for the kind words. I'm glad you liked it. I'm sure many men can relate
I changed the title. I did want it to be a mundane title at first, just to set up the mood. But I do see what you mean
I changed the title. I did want it to be a mundane title at first, just to set up the mood. But I do see what you meanQuote:Oh my goodness this was unexpectedly amazing! The title, to me, made it seem mundane. However, after reading it I was surprised! "Arctic hell hole" "clean up on isle six" "never again" etc and especially the ending were very entertaining to me. I would recommend a different title because it might scare people off from an awesome read. This truly is one of my favorite poems that I've read because its not only hilarious but its also relatable (idk if I spelled that right, its 6 am here and I'm still buzzed lol)

