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Reflection
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01-13-2013, 06:31 PM
Thank you for your feedback! A couple of issues I was concerned with were those long lines as you've stated and also with metaphors. I feel like I might have been lacking in symbolism and suffering with an overabundance of literal concepts
Here's my bio!
http://pigpenpoetry.com/Thread-Ayyy?pid=...#pid111236 |
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Reflection - by jferrell - 01-13-2013, 05:37 PM
RE: Reflection - by arbil_poieo - 01-13-2013, 06:21 PM
RE: Reflection - by jferrell - 01-13-2013, 06:31 PM
RE: Reflection - by arbil_poieo - 01-13-2013, 06:47 PM
RE: Reflection - by Card - 01-14-2013, 04:08 AM
RE: Reflection - by jferrell - 01-13-2013, 06:57 PM
RE: Reflection - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 01:50 AM
RE: Reflection - by jferrell - 01-14-2013, 02:55 AM
RE: Reflection - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 03:44 AM
RE: Reflection - by jferrell - 01-14-2013, 04:09 AM
RE: Reflection - by jferrell - 01-14-2013, 12:25 PM
RE: Reflection - by monablackbird - 01-16-2013, 12:15 AM
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RE: Reflection - by monablackbird - 01-17-2013, 01:14 AM
RE: Reflection - by newsclippings - 01-17-2013, 01:36 AM
RE: Reflection - by jferrell - 01-17-2013, 11:30 AM
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