01-13-2013, 02:53 PM
I think this is quite good. It tells a story in a way that reveals things bit by bit. The rhyming is nice too; it never feels forced and helps everything flow smoothly.
Good job!
Good job!
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first one I've written in a while "Try" - by destiny1313 - 01-13-2013, 01:25 PM
RE: first one I've written in a while "Try" - by BennyBoy - 01-13-2013, 02:53 PM
RE: first one I've written in a while "Try" - by destiny1313 - 01-13-2013, 03:30 PM
RE: first one I've written in a while "Try" - by arbil_poieo - 01-13-2013, 03:37 PM
RE: first one I've written in a while "Try" - by doolasmind - 01-13-2013, 08:01 PM
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