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Ballincollig (rev. I)
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01-13-2013, 10:04 AM
(01-13-2013, 09:34 AM)Leanne Wrote: I think that's a much better line to end on. More wistful. It's tighter -- though "despite of" is a bit odd, I'd say either just "despite" or "in spite of"I prefer and go for just "despite" but must break the lines differently then. Ok. it looks good to me now. I will look into it tmw again. Thank you once more! cheers serge |
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Ballincollig (rev. I) - by serge gurkski - 01-11-2013, 12:14 PM
RE: Ballincollig - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 07:31 AM
RE: Ballincollig - by serge gurkski - 01-13-2013, 08:00 AM
RE: Ballincollig (rev. I) - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 09:34 AM
RE: Ballincollig (rev. I) - by serge gurkski - 01-13-2013, 10:04 AM
RE: Ballincollig (rev. I) - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 10:09 AM
RE: Ballincollig (rev. I) - by serge gurkski - 01-13-2013, 10:14 AM
RE: Ballincollig (rev. I) - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 10:47 AM
RE: Ballincollig (rev. I) - by serge gurkski - 01-13-2013, 11:40 AM
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