01-13-2013, 07:13 AM
or, to really highlight that feeling of downward spiral, you could try just breaking on "by" and have the last limb on its own, without the ellipsis because that wouldn't be needed then.
It could be worse
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Love Poem No. 01 - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2013, 03:55 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 05:53 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2013, 07:08 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 07:12 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2013, 07:12 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 07:13 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2013, 07:14 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 07:22 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by serge gurkski - 01-13-2013, 07:23 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2013, 07:41 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by serge gurkski - 01-13-2013, 07:53 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by billy - 01-13-2013, 07:54 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2013, 08:11 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by billy - 01-13-2013, 08:19 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2013, 08:26 AM
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