01-12-2013, 05:02 AM
I thought about these lines.
"In drinking nights there is a point of time,
when I can as well close my eyes
and can confidently go on blind."
I have a multimedia mind, sometimes I think and feel cinematic cuts and cues, falling in and out. And worse.
I think those black outs, and chopped edits of lost time are helpful, in writing, and elsewhere. What can be added, or rearranged. Where emotions swell up in different tones.
But your lines run smoothly in a linear pace. Though I take them up in my mind, and go in different directions with them. That's why I like your poems.
"In drinking nights there is a point of time,
when I can as well close my eyes
and can confidently go on blind."
I have a multimedia mind, sometimes I think and feel cinematic cuts and cues, falling in and out. And worse.
I think those black outs, and chopped edits of lost time are helpful, in writing, and elsewhere. What can be added, or rearranged. Where emotions swell up in different tones.
But your lines run smoothly in a linear pace. Though I take them up in my mind, and go in different directions with them. That's why I like your poems.