Enchanted
#3
almost, with very short poems you can play about with the enjambment to see what works best.

His suffering Beauty
Enchanted
Her heart misguided

i'd also advise against all caps when using no grammar,




(01-11-2013, 10:31 AM)Fathima Wrote:  Does this make any sense?

His suffering
Beauty
Enchanted
Her misguided
Heart
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Enchanted - by Fathima - 01-11-2013, 10:31 AM
RE: Enchanted - by arbil_poieo - 01-11-2013, 12:06 PM
RE: Enchanted - by billy - 01-11-2013, 12:11 PM
RE: Enchanted - by Todd - 01-11-2013, 12:24 PM



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