Poieo
#13
hi ash, it doesn't need a re write and my pov and others will seldom be the same Big Grin
i thought it about the creator loving us but us failing too late to realize we're not capable of that kind of all giving love. as such i only saw the one voice...which could be more my problem than the poets.

and the poem did work for me which is always good.
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Poieo - by arbil_poieo - 01-09-2013, 02:45 PM
RE: Poieo - by billy - 01-09-2013, 05:28 PM
RE: Poieo - by newsclippings - 01-09-2013, 05:35 PM
RE: Poieo - by Arriedo - 01-09-2013, 09:55 PM
RE: Poieo - by Todd - 01-09-2013, 11:48 PM
RE: Poieo - by rowens - 01-10-2013, 12:28 AM
RE: Poieo - by arbil_poieo - 01-10-2013, 09:42 AM
RE: Poieo - by rowens - 01-10-2013, 09:52 AM
RE: Poieo - by arbil_poieo - 01-10-2013, 11:27 AM
RE: Poieo - by billy - 01-10-2013, 06:09 PM
RE: Poieo - by rowens - 01-11-2013, 11:34 AM
RE: Poieo - by arbil_poieo - 01-11-2013, 11:38 AM
RE: Poieo - by rowens - 01-11-2013, 11:02 PM
RE: Poieo - by billy - 01-11-2013, 11:57 AM
RE: Poieo - by Arriedo - 01-13-2013, 09:37 AM
RE: Poieo - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 04:14 AM
RE: Poieo - by Arriedo - 01-14-2013, 06:56 AM



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