01-11-2013, 11:38 AM
Hey Billy,
My thought behind this poem was to be about about a relationship of 2 people who thought that it was "divine" God's plan type of relationship like soulmates, they both wanted to last eternity but even eternity grinned at the fact that they were destined to be doomed because of how they acted toward each other. They both hold on even though it's pointless even mocking the fact that they can't get it right, toward the middle of the poem the narrator talks about it being pointless, so "we" becomes "I". To let go and have closure she wanted to write a poem about the relationship and at the end she finally does, with regret that in the end he became just her muse and to him an apology for her role in the relationship's failure. Pretty much the poem is the poem the narrator wrote to her ex boyfriend wanting a "visible" ending (the poem) and to apologize. At least that's what I intended it to mean, but it's a tricky poem. Hopefully this clears it all up, if not then I'll probably need to rewrite it and make it clearer.
My thought behind this poem was to be about about a relationship of 2 people who thought that it was "divine" God's plan type of relationship like soulmates, they both wanted to last eternity but even eternity grinned at the fact that they were destined to be doomed because of how they acted toward each other. They both hold on even though it's pointless even mocking the fact that they can't get it right, toward the middle of the poem the narrator talks about it being pointless, so "we" becomes "I". To let go and have closure she wanted to write a poem about the relationship and at the end she finally does, with regret that in the end he became just her muse and to him an apology for her role in the relationship's failure. Pretty much the poem is the poem the narrator wrote to her ex boyfriend wanting a "visible" ending (the poem) and to apologize. At least that's what I intended it to mean, but it's a tricky poem. Hopefully this clears it all up, if not then I'll probably need to rewrite it and make it clearer.
(01-11-2013, 11:34 AM)rowens Wrote: I went out and picked you up a more fetching dash... —Thank you Rowens, I appreciate that. I would't mind having an antique typewriter but they're hard to come by nowadays and expensive.
Just cut and paste it, if you want.
But yours remind me of the good old typewriter days. I still prefer typewriters to computers, but the Internet won't comply.