01-10-2013, 06:09 PM
okay, fairs fair, i wasn't confused as such i just wondered 
here you use we as in "the almighty we" or the "royal we" or 'celestial we'
engaged---we are
bare---obvious as the sun
in eternity's grin.
We remained whole
following
then it went all 'I' from here
Finally, a poem I created
i was wondering why not just keep the "we"?
here you use we as in "the almighty we" or the "royal we" or 'celestial we'
engaged---we are
bare---obvious as the sun
in eternity's grin.
We remained whole
following
then it went all 'I' from here
Finally, a poem I created
i was wondering why not just keep the "we"?