01-10-2013, 12:20 PM
Hey Keith,
Just pure art, it's the best way I can describe this. You have captured change, growing up, sadness, moving on and so much more in a way that makes this art.
"except for the ghosts of old furniture that appear, just for a second, as I enter each room." ---I think this is true, a perfectly worded image that is quite moving.
"Such places can be found in most of our footsteps and if you know how to look they can almost be touched."---I like the thought behind this and in my opinion one of the best lines I've read in a long time. It's just one of those lines that are unforgettable and meaningful.
This is one of those pieces that overwhelmingly exquisite from start to finish. It really allures the reader into the narrator's thoughts and feelings and feel close to this in a precious way. I really really like this, a majestic and touching read.
Just pure art, it's the best way I can describe this. You have captured change, growing up, sadness, moving on and so much more in a way that makes this art.
"except for the ghosts of old furniture that appear, just for a second, as I enter each room." ---I think this is true, a perfectly worded image that is quite moving.
"Such places can be found in most of our footsteps and if you know how to look they can almost be touched."---I like the thought behind this and in my opinion one of the best lines I've read in a long time. It's just one of those lines that are unforgettable and meaningful.
This is one of those pieces that overwhelmingly exquisite from start to finish. It really allures the reader into the narrator's thoughts and feelings and feel close to this in a precious way. I really really like this, a majestic and touching read.