Poieo
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i really liked it though goit confused by the "i" , the 'we' to represent the god felt more lofty.

A rough touch
in it's laugh.
Celestial-it assumes
dawn is a spiral
covered in atmosphere
wrapped in the warm
cold.

i fell for the thing after these lines.
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Poieo - by arbil_poieo - 01-09-2013, 02:45 PM
RE: Poieo - by billy - 01-09-2013, 05:28 PM
RE: Poieo - by newsclippings - 01-09-2013, 05:35 PM
RE: Poieo - by Arriedo - 01-09-2013, 09:55 PM
RE: Poieo - by Todd - 01-09-2013, 11:48 PM
RE: Poieo - by rowens - 01-10-2013, 12:28 AM
RE: Poieo - by arbil_poieo - 01-10-2013, 09:42 AM
RE: Poieo - by rowens - 01-10-2013, 09:52 AM
RE: Poieo - by arbil_poieo - 01-10-2013, 11:27 AM
RE: Poieo - by billy - 01-10-2013, 06:09 PM
RE: Poieo - by rowens - 01-11-2013, 11:34 AM
RE: Poieo - by arbil_poieo - 01-11-2013, 11:38 AM
RE: Poieo - by rowens - 01-11-2013, 11:02 PM
RE: Poieo - by billy - 01-11-2013, 11:57 AM
RE: Poieo - by Arriedo - 01-13-2013, 09:37 AM
RE: Poieo - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 04:14 AM
RE: Poieo - by Arriedo - 01-14-2013, 06:56 AM



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