01-09-2013, 10:30 AM
I really like the second stanza, you can feel the emotion behind it. I agree that the last two lines were unpredictable, I liked the change of pace, though it did make me giggle.
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Take Good Care of Her (explicit) - by BennyBoy - 01-09-2013, 06:36 AM
RE: Take Good Care of Her (explicit) - by arbil_poieo - 01-09-2013, 07:43 AM
RE: Take Good Care of Her (explicit) - by BennyBoy - 01-09-2013, 08:22 AM
RE: Take Good Care of Her (explicit) - by koolguy1029 - 01-09-2013, 10:30 AM
RE: Take Good Care of Her (explicit) - by newsclippings - 01-09-2013, 06:06 PM
RE: Take Good Care of Her (explicit) - by BennyBoy - 01-10-2013, 04:41 AM
RE: Take Good Care of Her (explicit) - by newsclippings - 01-10-2013, 06:21 AM
RE: Take Good Care of Her (explicit) - by destiny1313 - 01-10-2013, 03:02 PM
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