dream and be lost-feedback

[Keith]

Dream and be lost
Don't pretend to know
Own your confusion
Push off and let go

Float into nothing
Weightless in the air
Swim toward the sun
Do anything you dare

Know your reality
isn't all that can exist
Let go of your goals
have anything you wish

Let your thoughts flow
Don't analyze them all
I promose safety Promote or Propose ?
if you let yourself fall

life is an illusion
Stop looking for a clue
the point is, It's pointless
have fun until we're through

To add to the feedback all ready given I would only say try to show us some images rather that tell us

Let your thoughts flow
Don't analyze them all
I propose safety
if you let yourself fall

Could read

Mind melts with rivers flow
opens wide to oceans call
breaking now to eddie swirl
to dark plunge pools you fall

Ok this is a bit crapy but hope it helps explain what I mean I really like the subject and you poem but I do love a good image. TOMH