What do you guys think of this one?

What do you guys think of this one?

~~serge gurkski~~ Offline

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01-08-2013, 02:51 PM

I like the last 4 or 5 lines. The rest above seems a bit owed to the rhyming. I would not add context but rather content (which is difficult).
Thanks for the read and cheers

serge

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What do you guys think of this one? - by destiny1313 - 01-08-2013, 12:15 AM

RE: What do you guys think of this one? - by Wildcard - 01-08-2013, 01:13 AM

RE: What do you guys think of this one? - by BennyBoy - 01-08-2013, 10:24 AM

RE: What do you guys think of this one? - by billy - 01-08-2013, 11:54 AM

RE: What do you guys think of this one? - by destiny1313 - 01-08-2013, 12:00 PM

RE: What do you guys think of this one? - by serge gurkski - 01-08-2013, 02:51 PM

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