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my first post feedback please
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01-07-2013, 11:45 AM
Thank you for your feedback! I will rid of my (-'s) I have a bad habit of doing that. I am trying to get back into my writing and now have some pointers to revise this with which I really appreciate. Memories of the past...I liked that line but you are right its totally redundant.
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my first post feedback please - by destiny1313 - 01-07-2013, 10:51 AM
RE: my first post feedback please - by billy - 01-07-2013, 11:16 AM
RE: my first post feedback please - by destiny1313 - 01-07-2013, 11:45 AM
RE: my first post feedback please - by destiny1313 - 01-07-2013, 02:07 PM
RE: my first post feedback please - by arbil_poieo - 01-07-2013, 03:02 PM
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