01-06-2013, 02:15 PM
Very true, poems can't create sadness, it creates itself.
I like the last 2 lines they're very wise and "But as my muse began to cry" I think that's a best way to describe that moment when one is trying to write about pain.
An impressive poem with a philosophical twist, who could want more?
I like the last 2 lines they're very wise and "But as my muse began to cry" I think that's a best way to describe that moment when one is trying to write about pain.
An impressive poem with a philosophical twist, who could want more?