Leeward

[rowens]

"It's close to be real.

I so suggest
to trigger me to start swinging again."

To give critique, I say it's hard, because I get the rhythm of what's going on here. And the music of the language as it's spoken.

But I guess it could be "It's close to being real..."
And though the

"I so suggest
to trigger me to start swinging again."

Might sound a bit awkward, that is the way people in the South say things with a certain tone that fits here.

And besides all that, I liked the poem.