01-05-2013, 07:49 AM
yeah, i think you're getting it more or less.
the cut shouldn't be a carry on sentence though, it should be a statement of sorts. a great effort.
Scarlet sunset
Paints the town a pastel hue
life starts to slow
the cut shouldn't be a carry on sentence though, it should be a statement of sorts. a great effort.
Scarlet sunset
Paints the town a pastel hue
life starts to slow