01-04-2013, 05:54 AM
Wow, it's a really good poem! 
I love the poems that have short lines like this, it leaves you wanting more to me.
The one thing that I would change, was in the first stanza. If I had wrote this, I would have kept the word silence on the line above, but that may just be me. It's such a minor thing though.
I love the poems that have short lines like this, it leaves you wanting more to me. The one thing that I would change, was in the first stanza. If I had wrote this, I would have kept the word silence on the line above, but that may just be me. It's such a minor thing though.