01-04-2013, 05:37 AM
(01-03-2013, 05:58 PM)brandontoh Wrote: Thanks for the feedback! =O Do you mind elaborating more on what you mean by the poem not connecting in a cohesive way please?Hi, sorry if that was a bit vuage...Yep I was meaning that for me (personally) as i read this it left me feeling unconnected and ambivilant about the subject, despite the good imagery and aproach. (I got it and i liked it... but it didn't quite hook me in)
Hope this explains.