01-04-2013, 02:46 AM
No. It's pretty simple, and if you want it that way, that's ok.
To me, it just seems like it's part of something more. Like a minor poem. But you've been posting many other poems, so I'll look at those.
Sometimes I feel that certain poems carry more weight when seen in the light of the poet's other poems. And for some reason I got that feeling about this one.
It gives me the feeling of: All right, off to the next one.
To me, it just seems like it's part of something more. Like a minor poem. But you've been posting many other poems, so I'll look at those.
Sometimes I feel that certain poems carry more weight when seen in the light of the poet's other poems. And for some reason I got that feeling about this one.
It gives me the feeling of: All right, off to the next one.