Thoughts

[billy]

this is a much better effort love blind. way to go .
a few small things to mention.

These thoughts
attack my mind
causing destruction
sending mixed feeling
through my veins this verse works.

chills sliding between my bones
full figure smile across my face a at the beginning.
the hair in the back of my neck rising rising to rises. in to on

these thoughts has isolated me from the world have not has
drove me near insanity
but, made me feel high above and not but
the days I felt lower than ever.

line break after isolated

the rush flowing in every part
of my body make this the second line
secrets that only mind
and I can share

these thoughts
will effect how people no need for will
view me
however, these thoughts no need for however
are mine

much much better,
keep up the good work.

thanks for posting it loveblind.