01-03-2013, 02:57 PM
Rarely do I see poetry that is, for lack of better words, modern. I like reading something fluid and direct (I personally love being brief)
With that said, I think you could push this a little further. Make it a little meaner. ;]
With that said, I think you could push this a little further. Make it a little meaner. ;]
I'll be there in a minute.