Big Cat Lay Down One Eve

[serge gurkski]

I enjoyed some of the imagery of this piece - specifically the line:

sometimes sparrows, mostly sun beams

and the repetition of the idea of reminiscing gave this a sense of coming full circle, which I liked

I did think that it appeared to get heavier (if that is the right word) as it went on, the lines getting longer and more wordy, and the flow a little stilted near the end - but that is the only thing that I can think to point out as a critique. Maybe if you wanted to edit this you could look at trimming down the last stanza a little?

Although I did love the image of "roll-rubbing" - that is a great description - reminds me of my kittens

Overall, this was an enjoyable read.

Happy New Year,
you are right about "howsoever". Thank you! :-)

cheers
Serge