01-02-2013, 05:57 PM
(12-23-2012, 01:46 PM)travelpoet234 Wrote: One kiss this afternoon is all they can share.One kiss in this afternoon? That is enough, in my opinion. Some people can't share a kiss with the person they love in an entire lifetime. The couple of your poem is quite fortunate...
I like your style. Keep it up! Keep practicing and experimenting.