Haiku attempt two

[billy]

Blossoms fall like a spring shit
Then stick to our shoes
like a pet dogs sap

it's more of senryu jae, i wouldn't overly worry about the syllable count, though the 575 format is handy guide to work to till you get the hang of keeping it as tight as possible.

a haiki doesn't really use poetic device. (words like 'like' create a simile. )

Blossom nectar falls
sticks to the souls of my shoes
spring shit

just an example cos it was easier than explaining it .