pick a route. choose the type of poem you want ( a destination) take the best route to to. in truth there's little horror to the poem. and not too much humour. if you want it to have embrace black comedy then make it specific to black comedy, if you was it to be sexual, then make it so but have a theme (so yes, that's my answer 
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She reaches for erection hard and fat; could be;
She reaches for hard, fat erection, or
She reaches for the hard fat erection...the list is endless and the only one so far that's ambiguous is the original
)She reaches for erection hard and fat; could be;
She reaches for hard, fat erection, or
She reaches for the hard fat erection...the list is endless and the only one so far that's ambiguous is the original