try and make each line stand by itself (using syntax) of course it isn't mandatory but it helps in letting the reader understand better.
the 1st line could be
a loving stare
the mirror reveals my eyes
the last line is a little trickier
a loving stare
the mirror reveals fluid eyes
the face is concrete
try and work a bit of oomph into it
.
the 1st line could be
a loving stare
the mirror reveals my eyes
the last line is a little trickier
a loving stare
the mirror reveals fluid eyes
the face is concrete
try and work a bit of oomph into it
.