12-31-2012, 08:58 AM
oh and the last line in stanza 14 rhythm seems to jst be non existent, i don't know if you did that on purpose to add variety but it would make my reading much more pleasing if the same rhythm was constant.
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Butterfly Bridge edit 1. spelling corrections by uncle vert - by tectak - 12-29-2012, 09:29 AM
RE: Butterfly Bridge edit 1. spelling corrections by uncle vert - by aaron - 12-29-2012, 04:46 PM
RE: Butterfly Bridge edit 1. spelling corrections by uncle vert - by aaron - 12-31-2012, 08:58 AM
RE: Butterfly Bridge edit 1. spelling corrections by uncle vert - by tectak - 12-31-2012, 06:59 PM
RE: Butterfly Bridge edit 1. spelling corrections by uncle vert - by Pete Ak - 01-01-2013, 12:42 AM
RE: Butterfly Bridge edit 1. spelling corrections by uncle vert - by aaron - 01-01-2013, 03:55 AM
RE: Butterfly Bridge edit 1. spelling corrections by uncle vert - by tectak - 01-01-2013, 06:12 AM
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