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Hymn to tolerance
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12-31-2012, 01:12 AM
Short, sweet, and simple! For me, as a punctuation freak, there should be a comma after "brothers," and an apostrophe either before or after the "s" in "wars." It's really good, though. I like the word choice; I think they're really strong, and that everyone counts for something. It reminds me a little of Alan Paton novels!
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Hymn to tolerance - by Noursaid - 12-29-2012, 02:04 AM
RE: Hymn to tolerance - by ellz483 - 12-31-2012, 01:12 AM
RE: Hymn to tolerance - by Noursaid - 01-05-2013, 03:42 AM
RE: Hymn to tolerance - by brandontoh - 01-05-2013, 11:53 AM
RE: Hymn to tolerance - by Noursaid - 01-06-2013, 12:59 AM
RE: Hymn to tolerance - by Arriedo - 01-07-2013, 11:44 PM
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