Big Cat Lay Down One Eve

[serge gurkski]

Thank you for reading and commenting, winterborn!

As to your question (trimming the las stanza) I was wondering if the poem would loose anything if I just took out these lines:

I’m boxing back shabby me out into the air
sailing, dwindling down again mudheapupwards
but stay away from the skunks, their grins,
I need a fix of fresh of all.

What do you think? Would it make a difference?

cheers
Serge