Big Cat Lay Down One Eve

[rowens]

It's hard to say anything bad about a poem that seems as though the poet simply said exactly what he wanted to say, and that I can't find anything negative about.

It's in the "novice" part, so maybe you had things you didn't like about it?

There's some grammar issues, but even those don't cast any bad feelings over the poem, because dedending on how you approach them, they might be exactly what the poet wanted to say, and how he wanted to say it.

So what do you think about it? I think it's ok.