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Catch of the day
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12-29-2012, 10:53 PM
Great, thank you so much for your help! I'll sit down and try to improve it now...and yes, you're right, it sounds a little bit like he's after his own mum..that's weird!
 Thank you for pointing that out! I'll also try to give some feedback soon and get some help by reading more poetry...
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Catch of the day - by atalanta - 12-27-2012, 12:23 AM
RE: Catch of the day - by Leanne - 12-27-2012, 05:32 AM
RE: Catch of the day - by atalanta - 12-27-2012, 04:44 PM
RE: Catch of the day - by billy - 12-27-2012, 05:12 PM
RE: Catch of the day - by rowens - 12-28-2012, 12:31 AM
RE: Catch of the day - by smakpopy - 12-29-2012, 06:24 AM
RE: Catch of the day - by atalanta - 12-29-2012, 10:53 PM
RE: Catch of the day - by winterborn - 12-30-2012, 08:55 AM
RE: Catch of the day - by atalanta - 12-30-2012, 07:59 PM
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