Money's trouble
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What? What mistakes are you talking about? I think you need to read it againBlush lolBig Grin
Summers dry heat is an attempt at imagery of land dried out by summer heat.
Do you mean alley cat, and desert dog?

Im also wondering what a summers dry sheet could be

And shouldnt it be alley cat drips howling heat, not just drip?
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Money's trouble - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-29-2012, 01:42 PM
RE: Money's trouble - by smakpopy - 12-29-2012, 02:01 PM
RE: Money's trouble - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-29-2012, 02:23 PM
RE: Money's trouble - by cidermaid - 12-29-2012, 03:28 PM
RE: Money's trouble - by winterborn - 12-30-2012, 02:13 PM
RE: Money's trouble - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-30-2012, 10:26 PM
RE: Money's trouble - by cidermaid - 12-30-2012, 10:46 PM



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