12-27-2012, 08:17 PM
all i can say about the nipping nuzzle is, now it's explained it works, but so does lots of stuff that gets explained. the question is; would most people get it. not being a horse person i'm not the one to answer 
personally i'd say make it more definable to the general reader.
there's a form called cleave poetry but i don't think the same as what you're suggesting. though i'm not sure. it's sometimes the experimental poetry that opens wider doors. i'd say go for it
personally i'd say make it more definable to the general reader. there's a form called cleave poetry but i don't think the same as what you're suggesting. though i'm not sure. it's sometimes the experimental poetry that opens wider doors. i'd say go for it