If I Asked.

[arbil_poieo]

Very inspiring poem. I like the thought of getting help or guidance if asked but not asking from fear of disappointment and to be able to do it "yourself" it has a good meaning, I liked that you did that.

This is a simple and direct poem, but I think what can help it is reworking line 5, it's long and for the most part what it has to say is already shown in the poem.

Thank you for posting this.