12-25-2012, 08:44 AM
The narrative is harsh, but I like that it's so honest. The last line was like the final twist of the knife...really good.
"That a phony, lying faithfulness like you
any longer has much control over the things you say"
Speaks volumes, a really strong thought.
Overall, it's something any reader can relate to. It has that brutal honesty that makes it stick out and offers really good points.
"That a phony, lying faithfulness like you
any longer has much control over the things you say"
Speaks volumes, a really strong thought.
Overall, it's something any reader can relate to. It has that brutal honesty that makes it stick out and offers really good points.