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Two Things Made Her Smile
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12-22-2012, 09:48 AM
Wow, that is a wonderful poem! You have, in such a minimal amount of words, really painted a texture of Nana that is so lovable. The line "I burried my nose into her folds" in just a few words lets us know she was definitely not a skinny and brittle Nana and we also learned that you were a young child remembering her. Once again, a wonderful poem. Thanks.
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Two Things Made Her Smile - by Pete Ak - 12-21-2012, 05:17 AM
RE: Two Things Made Her Smile - by Leanne - 12-21-2012, 06:04 AM
RE: Two Things Made Her Smile - by arbil_poieo - 12-21-2012, 07:39 AM
RE: Two Things Made Her Smile - by billy - 12-21-2012, 09:18 AM
RE: Two Things Made Her Smile - by Pete Ak - 12-21-2012, 11:08 AM
RE: Two Things Made Her Smile - by billy - 12-21-2012, 11:55 AM
RE: Two Things Made Her Smile - by Pete Ak - 12-21-2012, 08:34 PM
RE: Two Things Made Her Smile - by 2onthemap - 12-23-2012, 06:07 AM
RE: Two Things Made Her Smile - by Pete Ak - 12-23-2012, 04:36 PM
RE: Two Things Made Her Smile - by Uncle Vertical - 12-22-2012, 09:48 AM
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