03-02-2010, 01:18 PM
I like it. I think it's a rather original way to describe the spirit of nature
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(02-27-2010, 09:07 AM)Loveblind Wrote: Nature as a metaphor.Thanks for this
• Her brightness distracts their view
• Body floating around in big cotton balls high above
• The tricks under her sleeves always new
• Providing certain cycles people love
• On dreary depressing days she dashes out tears
• Screaming and shouting she drove Don't think drove rhymes with love
• Yodeling her angelic voice through your ears
• While breezing past you in a fast pace maybe you don't need "you"
• Strong echoes you never fail to hear
• Different color coordinated makeup for her face
• Time passes if not well taken care of
• despite her selfish ways, in her heart is a place
• Gentle like a dove A cliche metaphor; you can definitely still push this image into something new
• Standing up into the skies
• Yet, still pushes out black gloves I'm not sure I understand this metaphor. But it's probably just me
• She’s there when you rise
• Just take a look outside with your eyes
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PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

