Nature
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I like it. I think it's a rather original way to describe the spirit of nature

(02-27-2010, 09:07 AM)Loveblind Wrote:  Nature as a metaphor.




• Her brightness distracts their view
• Body floating around in big cotton balls high above
• The tricks under her sleeves always new

• Providing certain cycles people love
• On dreary depressing days she dashes out tears
• Screaming and shouting she drove Don't think drove rhymes with love
• Yodeling her angelic voice through your ears
• While breezing past you in a fast pace maybe you don't need "you"

• Strong echoes you never fail to hear

• Different color coordinated makeup for her face
• Time passes if not well taken care of
• despite her selfish ways, in her heart is a place

• Gentle like a dove A cliche metaphor; you can definitely still push this image into something new Smile
• Standing up into the skies
• Yet, still pushes out black gloves I'm not sure I understand this metaphor. But it's probably just me Sad

• She’s there when you rise
• Just take a look outside with your eyes
Thanks for this Smile[/b]
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Nature - by Loveblind - 02-27-2010, 09:07 AM
RE: Nature - by billy - 02-28-2010, 08:49 AM
RE: Nature - by addy - 03-02-2010, 01:18 PM



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