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concentration - Haiku

concentration - Haiku
billy Offline
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12-11-2012, 04:01 PM
are you playing darts?

should there be a seasonal word? as it is, it feels more of senryu.
i like how you tried to re say 'on a knife's edge"
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concentration - Haiku - by benthejack - 12-11-2012, 04:57 AM
RE: concentration - Haiku - by cidermaid - 12-11-2012, 06:33 AM
RE: concentration - Haiku - by billy - 12-11-2012, 04:01 PM
RE: concentration - Haiku - by benthejack - 12-11-2012, 05:04 PM
RE: concentration - Haiku - by billy - 12-11-2012, 05:59 PM
RE: concentration - Haiku - by benthejack - 12-12-2012, 05:37 AM
RE: concentration - Haiku - by billy - 12-12-2012, 08:00 AM



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