concentration - Haiku
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--edit-- (not sure this edit does it justice)

balanced equipoise -
feathers awaiting wind's flight,
not even a breath.


--original--

poised on edge of blade,
feather on flight's careful watch -
not even a breath.
If something happens and you can remedy it, Why worry?
And if something happens that you can't remedy, Still why worry?

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concentration - Haiku - by benthejack - 12-11-2012, 04:57 AM
RE: concentration - Haiku - by cidermaid - 12-11-2012, 06:33 AM
RE: concentration - Haiku - by billy - 12-11-2012, 04:01 PM
RE: concentration - Haiku - by benthejack - 12-11-2012, 05:04 PM
RE: concentration - Haiku - by billy - 12-11-2012, 05:59 PM
RE: concentration - Haiku - by benthejack - 12-12-2012, 05:37 AM
RE: concentration - Haiku - by billy - 12-12-2012, 08:00 AM



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