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The rape of intelligence (new prompt)
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12-10-2012, 11:23 PM
i love the way this sounds. there's some cool rhythms in there. i like how the last stanza brought it all together but it seems like there could have been a smoother transition from the troglodyte stanza. the language you used and the rhyme scheme really suit the content. this was a cool read thanx!
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The rape of intelligence (new prompt) - by cidermaid - 12-05-2012, 05:38 PM
RE: The rape of intelligence (new prompt) - by Todd - 12-08-2012, 11:55 AM
RE: The rape of intelligence (new prompt) - by aaron - 12-10-2012, 11:23 PM
RE: The rape of intelligence (new prompt) - by monablackbird - 12-15-2012, 01:24 AM
RE: The rape of intelligence (new prompt) - by kamirakara - 12-19-2012, 06:19 AM
RE: The rape of intelligence (new prompt) - by cidermaid - 12-19-2012, 04:59 PM
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