12-10-2012, 11:19 AM
hi aaron, if you're a newb at it, or want to improve on the suck part 
try out the novice forum for a while. the feedback is geared up to be less forceful/in-depth and doesn't come across as too harsh. simple poetry can be some of the best so don't knock it for being simple. if you want any help just ask for it in the novice forum. it's the best way to improve.
try out the novice forum for a while. the feedback is geared up to be less forceful/in-depth and doesn't come across as too harsh. simple poetry can be some of the best so don't knock it for being simple. if you want any help just ask for it in the novice forum. it's the best way to improve.