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The rape of intelligence (new prompt)
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12-08-2012, 11:55 AM
Cidermaid, this was really cool. I liked where now the snicker-snack of greater minds It gave it such a through the looking glass feel. Your internal rhyme and alliteration really made this fun to read. I'll give the critique some more thought and come back if I have something.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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The rape of intelligence (new prompt) - by cidermaid - 12-05-2012, 05:38 PM
RE: The rape of intelligence (new prompt) - by Todd - 12-08-2012, 11:55 AM
RE: The rape of intelligence (new prompt) - by aaron - 12-10-2012, 11:23 PM
RE: The rape of intelligence (new prompt) - by monablackbird - 12-15-2012, 01:24 AM
RE: The rape of intelligence (new prompt) - by kamirakara - 12-19-2012, 06:19 AM
RE: The rape of intelligence (new prompt) - by cidermaid - 12-19-2012, 04:59 PM
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