12-08-2012, 04:18 AM
couple of things imo first is i think this is senryu cos is about people as haiku is nature
an like billy the use of 'undertow' a little confusing..have heard it used to describe the 'rat race' an life in general, but in a depressing morbid way not ever an uplifting one
i think am not understanding its use in this or totally missing the point
an like billy the use of 'undertow' a little confusing..have heard it used to describe the 'rat race' an life in general, but in a depressing morbid way not ever an uplifting one
i think am not understanding its use in this or totally missing the point