I'm a Silver Fox

[kamirakara]

Nice edit, brings out the stregnth of the lines that really count. I can feel the the desperation and you put over the lack of self worth really well (only a product of consumption) you could swap 2nd and 3rd Stanza round to give it a sense of finality, but thats just me. Thanks for the read.
TOMH

Thank you, I'll try it and see how it works ;D