Pocketful of Dragons

Pocketful of Dragons

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12-02-2012, 10:57 AM

the puff stanza is well enhanced with smaug, it sort of separates the men dragon from the boy dragon
it also looks better without the rest of the line so good edit.

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Pocketful of Dragons - by Todd - 12-01-2012, 02:49 PM

RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by Leanne - 12-01-2012, 03:11 PM

RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by Todd - 12-01-2012, 03:17 PM

RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by TwistedAngel - 12-01-2012, 05:24 PM

RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by Todd - 12-01-2012, 10:29 PM

RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by billy - 12-01-2012, 07:08 PM

RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by Leanne - 12-02-2012, 04:56 AM

RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 05:00 AM

RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by billy - 12-02-2012, 10:57 AM

RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 11:18 AM

RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by arbil_poieo - 12-02-2012, 12:22 PM

RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 01:37 PM

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