12-02-2012, 04:56 AM
Smaug is a stroke of genius (and not bad timing, since the movie's on its way!). I agree that the poem is stronger without that line, great suggestion and a good edit.
It could be worse
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RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by Leanne - 12-01-2012, 03:11 PM
RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by Todd - 12-01-2012, 03:17 PM
RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by TwistedAngel - 12-01-2012, 05:24 PM
RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by Todd - 12-01-2012, 10:29 PM
RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by billy - 12-01-2012, 07:08 PM
RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by Leanne - 12-02-2012, 04:56 AM
RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 05:00 AM
RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by billy - 12-02-2012, 10:57 AM
RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 11:18 AM
RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by arbil_poieo - 12-02-2012, 12:22 PM
RE: Pocketful of Dragons - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 01:37 PM
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